VAWN’S WORLD

Final Reflections

I, as a writer, have grown in this class and I have my peers to thank for that!

Helen: I really enjoyed her first paper her work in all her pieces is detailed and intricate. I especially loved her vocabulary. All of her words flowed beautifully and in all of her posted pieces. Even though i see Helen as being a very strong writer from the beginning I do think she has improved even more (if that's possible).

Kristin: I really enjoyed reading her papers. SHe has a great way of organizing each paper and her sentence structure is flawless. In essay three i could really feel the emotion she was trying to convey. And she organized it with the "*'s" which I though was beautiful.

Chantel- (Before I review her work I would first like to say THANK YOU! when you reviewed my papers in the workshops you were never afraid to tell me how it is, no sugarcoating and for me to develop to be the writer I want to be I needed that!) I was able to edit her paper TARDIS and I loved it. Her first paper was amazing as well. She always was able to show what she meant in such an elaborate way. Her papers gradually showed improvement (to the already great writer she is). I feel that if  was given three papers with no names on them I could definitely pick hers out!

John: I really enjoyed his third paper as well. His sentence structure and his word choice even in his first paper. Words such as "forefront" and "structure ridiculously predictable" seemed so vibrant and in times just simple words could convey a lot of emotion. He is a very strong writer! Good luck now that your all done with college John! CONGRATS!!

As for me and my writing! Ug. As i said earlier I learned a lot from my peers. I do feel that i developed a stronger vocabulary and possibly a more elaborate way of saying what i want. However I know i still need to work on a lot of things. Grammar and being in the same tense is one of my biggest issues. On the essays i did revisions for some of my edits were so slight but they made the biggest difference in my work. I was able to learn from my mistakes and grow from them. Although at times I had such a bad case of writers block and felt stupid I overcame that and was proud of each paper i wrote. No regrets no do overs!