Corbett Imitation Exercises

 

Model Sentence- The gallows stood in a small yard, separate from the main grounds of the prison and overgrown with tall prickly weeds.

 

Imitation- The car sat in the parking lot opposite the store of the mall and surrounded by piles of snow.  

 

Model Sentence- To have even a portion of this illuminated reason and truly philosophy is the highest state to which nature can aspire, in the name of the intellect.

 

Imitation- To have love, family, and a home is the highest state an individual could need.

 

Model Sentence- The real art that dealt with life directly was that of first men who told their stories round the savage campfire.

 

Imitation- The true way to deal with life is to tell stories around a campfire.

 

Variation- The fire flickered while stories of life echoed in the night.

 

Expression- The tales and stories tamed the flames that glow in the middle.

Posted by vaug9193 on December 8, 2008
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